http://twentymajor.net/2004/11/26/espresso-stories/ Tue, 06 Jan 2009 23:18:05 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.7 hourly 1 http://twentymajor.net/2004/11/26/espresso-stories/comment-page-1/#comment-2634 patricia Sun, 28 Nov 2004 13:55:00 +0000 http://twentymajor.net/?p=762#comment-2634 hehe. loved your 'wedding' entry. hehe. loved your ‘wedding’ entry.

]]> http://twentymajor.net/2004/11/26/espresso-stories/comment-page-1/#comment-2635 nanuk Fri, 26 Nov 2004 16:53:00 +0000 http://twentymajor.net/?p=762#comment-2635 Excellent character development. Strong denouement. Interesting use of psychological imagery, i.e. trampy as mommy/daddy substitute, hypodermic as death/phallus symbol. But I fault you on the lack of analysis of how this relates to the struggle of the working class. Excellent character development. Strong denouement. Interesting use of psychological imagery, i.e. trampy as mommy/daddy substitute, hypodermic as death/phallus symbol. But I fault you on the lack of analysis of how this relates to the struggle of the working class.

]]> http://twentymajor.net/2004/11/26/espresso-stories/comment-page-1/#comment-2636 Albino Neutrino Fri, 26 Nov 2004 10:47:00 +0000 http://twentymajor.net/?p=762#comment-2636 I liked your use of the word "trampy". That nearly made me cry. I liked your use of the word “trampy”. That nearly made me cry.

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