Espresso stories

Posted in Old blogger by Twenty Major on November 26th, 2004

Espresso Stories is a website where you can contribute stories of no more than 25 words.

Here’s mine.

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3 comments

  1. Albino Neutrino says:

    I liked your use of the word “trampy”. That nearly made me cry.

    November 26th, 2004 at 10:47 am

  2. nanuk says:

    Excellent character development. Strong denouement. Interesting use of psychological imagery, i.e. trampy as mommy/daddy substitute, hypodermic as death/phallus symbol. But I fault you on the lack of analysis of how this relates to the struggle of the working class.

    November 26th, 2004 at 4:53 pm
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  3. patricia says:

    hehe. loved your ‘wedding’ entry.

    November 28th, 2004 at 1:55 pm
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